The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/10
Very emotional story. I loved it. you do have talent
11/27/10
Ahhh... almost as touching as a Hallmark commercial! I could see the whole thing.
Great job!
11/30/10
Your writing ability is quite apparent. I loved the story. Very apropos for the season, and another reminder of the sacrifices the families of service make for us. Nicely done!
This is a sweet story and what a wonderful Thanksgiving surprise. I would recommend when you use s phone number in a story, you might want to make it a 555 number. Some people just can't resist calling a number when they see it. ( I promise to resist ) overall you did a nice job.