The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/10
Good. Very good. A good review of a common problem in all our lives. You pointed out how we grow up being taught the importance of the phone, it's problems and then it's uses. I can picture people I know in each of these situations. Enjoyable read.
11/26/10
Yes, this is a great read. I am so in agreement with you. Telephones can be a menace and you described it all so well. Glad for the happy little ending. Yes, a telephone does have its place.
11/29/10
I love the progressiveness of your story - how the phone plays out in the life of an infant to the life of an old man. Lots of potential in this piece.
12/02/10
Congratulations on your EC! Your story really showed how the phone can have different impacts in different lives. Nice job I really enjoyed the progression and the so real characters.
12/02/10
Congratulations on your well-deserved recognition...not too many Beginners make it in the top ten. Well done.
12/03/10
Wonderful story! Loved the way you portray the phone's role in the many facets of our lives. I could imagine each scene very clearly and you captured the "voice" of each character. Nice job!