The Official Writing Challenge
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Good. Very good. A good review of a common problem in all our lives. You pointed out how we grow up being taught the importance of the phone, it's problems and then it's uses. I can picture people I know in each of these situations. Enjoyable read.
Yes, this is a great read. I am so in agreement with you. Telephones can be a menace and you described it all so well. Glad for the happy little ending. Yes, a telephone does have its place.
I love the progressiveness of your story - how the phone plays out in the life of an infant to the life of an old man. Lots of potential in this piece.
Congratulations on your EC! Your story really showed how the phone can have different impacts in different lives. Nice job I really enjoyed the progression and the so real characters.
Congratulations on your well-deserved recognition...not too many Beginners make it in the top ten. Well done.
Wonderful story! Loved the way you portray the phone's role in the many facets of our lives. I could imagine each scene very clearly and you captured the "voice" of each character. Nice job!