The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/10
You brought tears to my eyes, even though I am still so blessed to have my husband of 61 years. Good job.
I so understand the pain of the MC. I like how you showed both points of view.
11/29/10
I could feel the pathos and pain. Short, but with tremendously powerful, emotional impact. Look into Greeting card publications.
This might fill a niche in that market.