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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: On the Telephone (11/18/10)

TITLE: The Anniversary Call
By Carolynne Masters
11/19/10


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If you were still here with me, I could call you on the phone.
If my love’s life had not ended, I would not feel so alone.
Therefore, I am sending out this message, saying I will be all right.
Though each moment I am without you, seems like the world has lost its light.
For the pain that I am feeling, though it seems will not go away.
With each breath, it has gotten easier, for my heart simply to say.
I will always think about you, on this our anniversary.

My love, I am still here with you, though I cannot call on the phone.
Though my mortal life has ended, I have not left you alone.
Therefore, I am sending you this message, to say everything’s all right.
As I look from here upon you, I see a world that is full of light.
For the pain that I was feeling, it has all now gone away.
Still for you, it has not been easy, so I am telling you today.
I am with you still in spirit, on this our anniversary.


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Verna Mull 11/25/10
You brought tears to my eyes, even though I am still so blessed to have my husband of 61 years. Good job.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 11/26/10
I so understand the pain of the MC. I like how you showed both points of view.
Lillian Rhoades 11/29/10
I could feel the pathos and pain. Short, but with tremendously powerful, emotional impact. Look into Greeting card publications.
This might fill a niche in that market.