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This is a suspenseful story. I could picture a Lifetime movie the whole time I was reading it. Good job.
11/20/10
What a great story. I could hardly read fast enough. Not sure if it is real or not, but if it is, what a loving mother you were privileged to have, and not be raised by someone who would sell their child. One could really feel the deep love of the mother you really had, even though the method of having a child of her own is questionable, there is no question of the true love.Great story, whatever the facts.
Wow, wish there were more than 750 words for you to tell this story. I saw a lot of comma errors, but otherwise well-written. Good job.
11/22/10
Amazing story. Most interesting and well written.
11/22/10
Great story line. Held my interest. I've had experience with adoptions, so I can certainly relate to your MC
Outstanding. You held my interest throughout. Good writing.