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11/18/10
Good spread of ideas and cogently presented. Perhaps a few media synonyms would add extra variety.
But you're right. As a card-carrying member of the older generation, I would never find happiness in a red dress!
This was an essay that causes one to think. You definitely got your opinion across in a clear, concise manner.
11/21/10
Interesting and very true re your comments about older people and the media. The show, not tell principle comes in handy here. A few anecdotes to highlight the facts would give your article more sparkle.