The Official Writing Challenge
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11/18/10
I like your analytical, open-hearted style, but spacing between your paragraphs will improve your readability.
As you highlight and paste your next article onto the entry box, scroll down through it and press the enter key at the end of each paragraph.
Then your entries will come out more clearly.
I apologise for not sending this privately, but the required anonymity at this point of the Challenge makes that impossible.
Keep up the good work.
I like how you showed the progression of reality TV. If I'm honest I watch it because it makes me feel better about myself. That truth makes me sad so I start praying for the lives of the people I'm watching. Maybe in that respect some good can come from it. Nice job your article really made me think.
11/22/10
You did a good job of describing reality television. I watch some shows, but I pick and choose. Good take on the topic. Thanks for writing.