The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/10
It's refreshing to read an entry about how much good the media can be.
Nice job. I really liked your ending. You missed the typo of your instead of you in the end but you are doing a great job and presented a wonderful message. Keep on writing!
11/21/10
We have so many methods of reaching out and touching some one. You showed that very clearly - internet and phone - in your story. As mentioned, a bit more attention to grammar. We all make them, but editing and more editing before submission cuts down on the faux pas.
"Even if when you," would read better as: "Even when you're..."
11/22/10
A very positive message about the media. I found it refreshing. Keep writing.