Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Win A Publishing Package HERE            

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge

BACK TO
CHALLENGE
MAIN

INSTRUCTIONS

how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level

ENTRIES

submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners



Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST



Share
how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: The Media (in any form) (11/11/10)

TITLE: The Call At Seven
By Ken Ebright
11/14/10


 LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 ADD TO MY FAVORITES

The phone rang at seven in the morning in Pastor Randy’s office. He waited a second to answer the phone because he thought it might be bad news. “Hello, this is Pastor Randy.”

“This is John Hanson, do you remember me?”

Pastor paused for a second, "John Hanson, John Hanson, Hmmm,” after a moment Pastor said, “I remember you, how could I forget. I was just teasing you. Do you still live in Orlando?”

John laughed, “Yes, I do, by the way, you’re just as funny as I remembered.”

“Is there something I can do for you?” asked Randy.

John slowly said, “I wanted to tell you how much I loved your sermon on
Psalm 23 that you preached two weeks ago.”

Pastor Randy smiled as he said, “Why thank you, I didn't see you in church. If you were here, why didn’t you come up to me and say hi after the service?”

“I would have, if I was there, but I listened to your sermon on your website,” said John.

Pastor Randy got excited, “You listened to me on the Internet! I forget about the fact that someone outside of Minnesota could listen to me preach. It’s amazing that I can have a Florida listener in Minnesota.”

John smiled, “Isn't today’s technology amazing?”

Pastor gave a slight laugh, “Yes it is, how did I touch you?”

John paused for a second, as he gave what he wanted to say some thought. “Today, with what is going on in this country, there is so much anxiety, so much to worry about. The 23rd Psalm talks about resting in green pastures. I liked your illustration about being at your cabin near Lake Mille Lacs and how lush green it is. You said it is very peaceful and that Jesus is like a green pasture. If we asked Jesus into our life, we can rest in him.”

Pastor smiled as he said, “I am glad that it had such a powerful impact on you.”
John's voice sounded downtrodden, “Pastor, I am concerned about how all these new taxes will impact my family. Were just barely surviving. Your words gave me peace.”

Pastor sounded reassuring, "John, I can understand your situation, I feel led to pray for you. Would that be okay?”

John started to cry, “Pastor Randy, I would love it if you prayed for me.”

Pastor paused and closed his eyes, “Dear Lord, these seem to be hard times. My brother in John has some anxieties about his financial situation right now and in the future. You have said in your word that you will never leave us or forsake us. Father I pray that you will provide and that you would give John peace so that the green pastures can become a place of peace. Reassure him you that you are Lord of John’s life and you will never leave him. In Jesus name. Amen.”

John sounded happier, “Pastor, it is so good to hear your voice.”

You could hear the smile in Randy's voice, “John it is good to hear yours too.”

“Thank you for your prayer,” said John.

“Call any time, my door is always open even if when you a thousand miles away, bye.”


The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE

JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.


This article has been read 265 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Jan Ackerson 11/20/10
It's refreshing to read an entry about how much good the media can be.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 11/20/10
Nice job. I really liked your ending. You missed the typo of your instead of you in the end but you are doing a great job and presented a wonderful message. Keep on writing!
Lillian Rhoades 11/21/10
We have so many methods of reaching out and touching some one. You showed that very clearly - internet and phone - in your story. As mentioned, a bit more attention to grammar. We all make them, but editing and more editing before submission cuts down on the faux pas.
"Even if when you," would read better as: "Even when you're..."
Brenda Rice 11/22/10
A very positive message about the media. I found it refreshing. Keep writing.