The Official Writing Challenge
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I almost thought this interesting series of stories was meant for last week's topicgossip. I enjoyed how you
Progressed through the different ways of communication. Now that I think about the telegraph certainly was a forebearer to the Internet. Nice job.
11/13/10
Each section of your article is well written. You have a nice flow to your stories. I missed the connection somehow. Keep writing, you are good at it.
11/13/10
It is a great story and you made it flow beautifully. I think the connection was they were all wireless?
Perhaps not a lot of emphasis on cyber but a clever story none the less.