The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/10
A great article, and I too, have a friend who couldn't stand children and she has become almost an idol to the many children that she works with now. Great job of expressing this. Keep writing.
This is a great story. I liked how you took the reader on the journey with the MC as she tried to figure out what to do with her life.

Make sure you put the end quote marks when the speaker is done.

You did a great job pulling me into the story. I found myself rooting for both the little girl and Lauren. Nicely done.
11/13/10
You did a nice job with this story. It's great how the Lord moves us into our calling. Good writing.
11/13/10
Great article, drew me in and wanted me to finish it to find out what happened. A little distracting with quick point of view changes but still clear as to what's happening. Enjoyed reading it.