The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/10
You tackled a very important subject here, yet you tempered it with humor. Good job! A few technical edits would make it even better.
This is a really good idea. I've never heard of such a bill, but it makes a lot of sense. If there isn't one like that on the House floor, maybe you could suggest it to your representative. If there is a bill out there like this, you did a good job calling it to people's attention.
11/13/10
You did a good job with this very important subject. I liked how you showed your MC's nervousness. Keep writing you have good stories to tell.