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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Hotel/Motel (09/12/05)

TITLE: A Relaxing Place
By karen McLamb
09/19/05


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ďAs we go and find a soothing place to relax, in North Carolinas, I spotted a stunning hotel to stay at. As we check into the lodge, I choose to go in, the room, my husband said wait! I have to check the area out, to make sure there is know one hiding in it.
Is there a ghost in the room? I ask Yes! There can, even be a corpse dear!
Oh! What! Thatís frightening, But! Itís also true, most people wouldnít believe that.Not even myself. Being in the Carolinas, in this nice climate, we are really enjoying ourselves, swimming, golfing, excising I could not have had a healthier time enjoying the atmosphere. The pure atmosphere does make a different for my husband and me to traveling in. All the rooms in the world would not have the same view. The area we were in was very countryside. With dirt roads, we really did enjoy our journey coming and going from Raleigh Durham North Carolina


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Debbie Sickler09/20/05
Why so short? You've got plenty of words left, tell us more!

You could expand this idea by describing your room or maybe why you and your husband are in NC. This could be a start of a nice story, just keep writing.
B Brenton09/22/05
OOOOOOKKKK... I tried to read this. But you really told me nothing. Have an idea before you write essentially nothing. God bless and I hope I'm not too harsh. I find the harshest critizim helps me, so I hope it helps you too!