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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Cyber Communication (email, IM’s, etc) (11/04/10)

TITLE: This Tacit Yell
By Bola M. Eyinla
11/06/10


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The echo of the still voice within me, and the agony of questions unanswered, made me shudder, and wonder how pleased, I would have been, if I could have sent an electronic mail to you. It would have been marvelous!

Too bad, you did not have an electronic mailing address or a personal computer.
Those questions that disturbed me would have been referred to you, and you would have had a chance to tell your version of the story.

Oh, how I wished, I had the opportunity, to have sent a message, that you, would have received instantly. I could have expressed the outrage, frustration and sorrow I felt towards you.

That grievous mistake you made, did not only affect a few of us, but it nearly ruined all our lives. Some of us even had to commit suicide!

I would have loved to have sent you an electronic mail, that presented these questions; “WHAT FOOL DOES THAT, AND NOT APOLOGIZE FOR HIS ACTIONS?” “HOW DARE YOU?” “DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA, ABOUT WHAT YOU DID, AND THE PREDICAMENT YOU LEFT US IN?”

According to Genesis 2:15-17, The Lord God took you, and put you in the Garden of Eden, to tend and guard and keep it, And the Lord God, commanded you, saying, You may freely eat of every tree of the garden; But of the tree of the knowledge of good and evil, and blessing and calamity you shall not eat, for in the day that you eat of it you shall surely die.

“WHICH PART OF THIS COMMAND DID YOU NOT UNDERSTAND?” “DID YOU NOT UNDERSTAND WHAT GUARDING AND KEEPING MEANT?” “HOW FIRM AND SERIOUS WERE YOU WHEN YOU RELAYED THE COMMAND TO EVE?”

“WHERE WERE YOU, ANYWAY.” “ I MEAN, WHEN THE SERPENT APPROACHED YOUR WIFE?” “WERE YOU NOT SUPPOSED TO GUARD AND PROTECT EVE, TOO?” “WHY DID YOU BLAME EVE, AND GOD AFTER YOU WERE CAUGHT?”

One question that was answered, by the book of Genesis 3:6, is the one about where you were, when the serpent approached your wife. This scripture confirmed that you were right there with her, ‘stepfather!'

“DID YOU EVEN CARE OR TRY TO STOP HER?” “IF YOU DID NOT UNDERSTAND GOD’S COMMAND, DID YOU ASK GOD FOR CLARIFICATION?” “IF YOU WERE CRAVING AN APPLE, WHY DID YOU NOT ASK GOD FOR ONE?”

“IF YOU WERE SO EAGER FOR KNOWLEDGE, WHY DID YOU NOT ASK THE CREATOR FOR GUIDANCE?”

The Creator put you in the Garden of Eden to tend, guard and keep it. “HOW THEN, DID THE SERPENT GET THROUGH ON YOUR WATCH?” “SLACKING ON THE JOB, HUH?”

“WHY DID YOU NOT TELL OUR MOTHER, INITIALLY, THAT YOU DID NOT WANT CHILDREN?” “WHY DID YOU HAVE TO PRETEND TO LOVE US, AND THEN HAND US OVER TO THE OPPRESSOR?”

Most of my questions are still pending, but I am glad that you are not our Real Father. I am exceedingly delighted in the fact that our Real Father is the Father of all Fathers. Our Father has been incredible to us, and we do not have to dwell on, or pay for your mistakes any longer.

All the power and ammunition that, you gave to the oppressor has been restored to us seven-folds, and we are no longer in captivity. Our Father has been able to pick us up, dust us off, and make us shimmer like gold!

I am glad that we have a Father that is, available all the time, and that will never leave us! He gave His life, to deliver us from the bondage you endowed us. He also gave us a Companion and Counselor, so we would never be helpless. It was good that you left because you couldn’t have measured up to our Dad, ever!

“GOOD BYE ADAM, AND GOOD RIDDANCE...”.


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Verna Mull 11/12/10
Great article. You really had me wondering for a while!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 11/12/10
You really gave me quite a bit to think about. I liked how you showed your passion so clearly on the page. You don't need to put quotes around each sentence just at the beginning and end of each speakers speech. Keep writing with all of that emotion you shared with the reader.
Brenda Rice 11/13/10
Thanks for sharing your view of the topic this week. Keep writing.