The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/10
Yes, he could have been a time traveler! I enjoyed the story but wondered when the boys would stop arguing and tell him they would get his letter to pony express! Keep Writing.
11/11/10
"Could he possibly have been...?" an an angel unaware? A cup of water in Jesus' name can take on many forms. Just wondering. Nice story.
11/12/10
An Alzheimer sufferer? Great article none the less, but can't help feeling very sorry for the guy, even if he had understood "Progress"
This is a great story. I really enjoyed it from beginning to end. The part that touched my heart the most was that the young man really wanted to help the older one. Now that's what really makes the world go around!
11/13/10
Good writing. Great take on the subject and very interesting.