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This was a realistic story. I'm sure every church has those gossips in their churches. You dd a good job telling this story. I really liked the last line.
11/07/10
How sad to think that this sort of thing goes on in churches!

There were several stories this week that dealt with the theme of misunderstanding an innocent situation. I'd encourage you (and the others, of course) to think out of the box, and if you're going to use a common situation, to give it an unexpected twist.

The idea of 'spiritual tape' at the end is really, really cool.