The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting story and a great example how rumors can get so out of hand.

I was a little confused at times about who was speaking. Make sure you start a new paragraph with each new speaker, even if it's only a sentence long.

Good job at nice descriptions and an interesting story.
11/06/10
Had a little trouble following the conversations, but still a very good example of when someone repeats what they "thought" that they heard.
11/07/10
Perfect title--my daughters were in drama when they were in high school, and drama club is full of...too much drama!

I got lost in the characters a few times, and I think your mention of two different plays was a bit confusing.

You definitely captured high school girls and their cattiness...well done.