The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some great points and I liked that the pastor gave a sermon on the problem at hand. Just remember you font need to summarize with those last few words " the church moved on..." you told a good story let the reader figure put for thselves what the lesson is and that the church is sorry because they apologized. Keep up the good work and don't ever stop writing.
11/07/10
Your first sentence is AWESOME!
11/07/10
I don't go to Faith Church, but I've been through some situations that would rival the one in your story. I enjoyed reading this and I want to encourage you to keep writing.