The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow you make a vivid point. Your words draw a very haunting picture for me. Well done.
11/07/10
Extremely vivid images, making an excellent point very clearly. You had me engrossed. Wow.
11/07/10
Awesome imagery, and a VERY strong entry. Loved it.
11/09/10
WOW--you had me intrigued from start to finish with this eerie tale. Great job--are you sure you're a beginner.
Congratulations on your EC!
Outstanding imagery here and what a great message!

Congratulations on 1st place in your level, and on your EC! Excellent work!
How about that! A first place ribbon aand an EC. Great job and a superb story!
11/11/10
Wonderful creativity, Nancy... AND an excellent message! Congrats on your ribbon and your Editor's Choice award!
12/23/10
This story is great! It is so true of gossip....I thank God for Christ who redeeemed me. I used to gossip a couple of years ago and God allowed the Holy Spirit to show me just how ugly gossip really is. I'm so grateful for deliverance. Thank you for sharing in such an interesting way. God bless you.
Just read for the first time. Wow! Double Wow!! What can I say, but absolutely breath taking....