The Official Writing Challenge
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This poem is positively beautiful. Not an easy thing to do but what great advice!
It was once told to me "hate the sin but love the sinner" I agree it is hard to do.
11/06/10
Your poem reveals your tender spirit--nicely done.

Poems with very long lines are sometimes difficult to read. It might be better to space after each couplet or quatrain, or two divide each long line into two shorter ones.

Thanks for this sensitive poem!
I agree with the spacing and I had done that but when I submitted it, it turned out the way it posted. I reveiwed it to! I don't know, but thank you for the comments and I would love for more critiquing on my other entries. I really want to write and make a career out of this..hopefully starting here helps! Blessings!