The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/10
This was good, but I would have enjoyed it more if specific people were not named. (I realize it was a group that was named but would seem to be better if the gossipers were not pointed out, I feel. You certainly use some great reasoning and solid scripture which I appreciated. God bless you.
I really enjoyed the visual picture of the majestic Redwood falling when the moth gets under it's bark. What a great analogy just a little bug of gossip can fell the mighty.
Keep writing. That is how we all get there.

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11/06/10
Your object lesson with the redwoods is excellent!

Polish up a few things like paragraph spacing and a few minor capitalization errors, and this would be a great Bible study for a small group.
Congratulations on your highly commended story.
I loved, loved , loved the title, Shanta, and the entry blessed my socks off. Great work.