The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great example of how something little can snowball into s huge problem.
It is interesting to see how things snow ball. My accusation that I wrote for this Challenge started when I asked for prayer about someone bashing on our front door then jumping through. After the meeting the Lady made comments of which I answered and startd a ball rolling that should not have got started. How tragic when people take things further than it really is.
11/06/10
Very amusing! Well, prayer is never wasted...this was a fun story to read.

A note: use words for numerals under twenty. Such a minor nitpick!

I liked the title of this, and I thank you for writing it.
11/07/10
This is very well written and enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing.
11/08/10
Cute story. If I might suggest one thing, perhaps swapping some pronouns for first names would be good. I got a little confused in the middle. Thanks for sharing your story!
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