The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this. You told it in a fast-paced way the way Im sure the MC was feeling.
You may want to break it into shorter paragraphghs for a short story but your passion for the Bible and its history is quite apparent.
10/31/10
I liked this--it helped me to empathize with Onesimus and his plight.