The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sweet story. Sometimes the truth can hurt bit if it's done with love wonderful things can happen.
10/31/10
Seeing things in writing can really help a lot, can't they?

Be careful of using 'haft' when you mean 'have'. Until I got to the end, I thought Alice was his wife and Cindy was their daughter.

I'm glad that your main character stayed calm and wise through all the shouting.