The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a gripping tale to read. Sometimes a hand-written letter is the answer. Your story rounded me to thank God (and them) for giving me the most amazing in-laws.
10/31/10
I was especially intrigued with your most minor character--Tom. Just that glimmer in his eyes made me want to know more about him.

Consider using that kind of 'showing' when you write characters in future stories. I also felt that the 'letter' aspect of this story was perhaps not as important as it might have been to the story.

Your story made me thankful for so many things in my life--thank you so much!