The Official Writing Challenge
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A great message expressed in a delightful way. Good job.
This is a beautiful poem with a touch of humor and a great message
This is lovely. Well done.
10/31/10
This poem is top-notch in meter, and you have some exquisite rhymes--well-done!

My only critique is that the topic is only implied.

This is really outstanding, and I had to double-check your level! What a treat to find this here!
Congratulations for placing 6th in level 1!
11/07/10
Very nicely done... I enjoyed reading this very much!!!