The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a touching story when confronted with such pain it is natural to want to lash out. Thankfully, if we listen, God will intercede.
10/30/10
Very, very good, from the awesome title to the last word. I loved the 'non-wrapped-up' ending and your lyrical choice of words.

10/31/10
If this is a true story, God Bless You and may He take your pain away. If it is not a true story, it is very well written. Either way, it was received with interest and much compassion. Thank you for sharing. blessings...Laura
11/04/10
I like this very much. Well written, Vince
Well deserved win! You have a wonderful writing voice. Great use of similes by the way. Congratulations. Stan
Your story drew me in and kept me reading. Outstanding work and a very well deserved 1st place AND EC!! Wow! Look forward to more great work from you.
Congratulations on your EC!
11/04/10
Excellent, pure excellence. This is why I like FWs. Great writing; inspiring.
Congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!
God bless.
Congrats on your win! This is a very emotional story and the MC had a very tough decision in writing that letter.

Great job!
11/09/10
A strong statement of faith in our Sovereign God. Great job.
11/11/10
Heart-tugging and inspiring are the words that came to me as I read this excellent piece. This writing is way above level 1. Congrats on this winning entry and I expect to see you advancing real soon.