The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a touching story when confronted with such pain it is natural to want to lash out. Thankfully, if we listen, God will intercede.
Very, very good, from the awesome title to the last word. I loved the 'non-wrapped-up' ending and your lyrical choice of words.

If this is a true story, God Bless You and may He take your pain away. If it is not a true story, it is very well written. Either way, it was received with interest and much compassion. Thank you for sharing. blessings...Laura
I like this very much. Well written, Vince
Well deserved win! You have a wonderful writing voice. Great use of similes by the way. Congratulations. Stan
Your story drew me in and kept me reading. Outstanding work and a very well deserved 1st place AND EC!! Wow! Look forward to more great work from you.
Congratulations on your EC!
Excellent, pure excellence. This is why I like FWs. Great writing; inspiring.
God bless.
Congrats on your win! This is a very emotional story and the MC had a very tough decision in writing that letter.

Great job!
A strong statement of faith in our Sovereign God. Great job.
Heart-tugging and inspiring are the words that came to me as I read this excellent piece. This writing is way above level 1. Congrats on this winning entry and I expect to see you advancing real soon.