The Official Writing Challenge
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Thanks for the nice peek into a security officer's job as well as a look beyond the gates.
10/21/10
Thanks for sharing the not so simple tasks of a security officer :-) Sounds like interesting work - if you're a patient people person!
10/24/10
Your second paragraph, with the unusual names, is very interesting. I'd like to see that expanded into a full-length story; it's quite amusing.

Parts of your entry seemed almost report-like--you may get more reader reaction with a more relaxed voice.

Thanks for giving us some insight into the value of communication.
Congratulations for placing 11th in your level!