The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/10
I love your story! God is all around us.

10/23/10
You did a great job with the imagery--I can readily imagine the ladybug in the can of paint.

This may be a tad off-topic; other than the fact that your friend told you the story, it's not really about a conversation.

Love the spiritual application at the end--I've never read a devotional with this illustration and application.
10/23/10
This good be the body of s great devotion. I liked how you took an everyday life and showed a lesson in it.