The Official Writing Challenge
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You say a lot of good things here. I wonder, though, if it might have fit the topic better to show the conversation between the two and by the conversation show how they move from hurt to hope. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me. " How wonderful to be reminded of Christ's promise. He will always help us in every situation whether it be a well- needed conversation with a spouse or a friendly chat with someone who is lonely. Thanks for the reminder.
This is an entry that I think many people will relate to.

Shorter paragraphs and the inclusion of some dialogue might improve the flow a bit.

You really shared your heart in a very vulnerable way, and it's quite beautiful.
Good writing and very good picture of a too common need. Talking heart to heart is sometimes the most difficult thing we can do.
Congratulations on a great placing!!!
Congratulations on your HC. Well deserved!
Almost reads like a journal entry. You described your struggle very well. Keep writing!