The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 406 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
What a sweet time between grandma and grandson!
Out of the mouths of babes. I remember once when I was grieving my 2 1/2 yo nephew asked me if I'd like to get ice cream with him cuz ice cream always makes everything better. Your story is full of pain but also so sweet that your little guy could help your heart to heal. Thank you for sharing such a special moment with me.
Out of the mouths of babes. I remember once when I was grieving my 2 1/2 yo nephew asked me if I'd like to get ice cream with him cuz ice cream always makes everything better. Your story is full of pain but also so sweet that your little guy could help your heart to heal. Thank you for sharing such a special moment with me.
Out of the mouths of babes. I remember once when I was grieving my 2 1/2 yo nephew asked me if I'd like to get ice cream with him cuz ice cream always makes everything better. Your story is full of pain but also so sweet that your little guy could help your heart to heal. Thank you for sharing such a special moment with me.
Sorry about all the comments. My computer wouldn't let me post and kicked me off but must have registered that I hit submit a few times. :) I did like your story too!
10/23/10
Some very lovely writing in this tender entry.

A small piece of advice: exclamation points are best limited to use in dialoge, not narrative.

Your descriptions were well-done and I felt very much 'in the scene'.
10/24/10
Sweet story and well written. Those golden apples are truly blessings in our lives.
Congratulations on your 3rd place ribbon!!!
Loved your title, very artsy. Congratulations on your placement!
10/28/10
Congratulations! Well deserved placing.
Sweet story. Moved my heart. Congrats!