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09/16/10
Yuor description of this special place makes me want to join you. A beautiful reminder or our need and His desire to spend time together.
09/16/10
Apologies for the destracting typo :(
09/17/10
This was beautiful and peaceful.
09/20/10
I want to go with you. I can feel the peace emanating from your descriptions.
09/21/10
Good writing that makes me remember how important it is to have that special place with the One we love, away from the harshness and difficulties of the world.
09/21/10
Poetry in prose - simply beautiful. You have a gift with linking words and phrases together that literally paints scenes into the readers mind. With work like this, I doubt you will be in Beginners long.
09/21/10
Very good writing, especially for a beginnner. You won't be a beginner for long though! Keep it up.
09/21/10
Great title. I love the forests and I'm blessed to live where it is a matter of mere minutes away and I can sing the "River Song" of mu soul. Very good descriptive scene setting.
09/21/10
Lovely. I have no red ink for this. Simply beautiful.
09/22/10
Really, really good! You've got a good handle on "showing not telling", and I love the symbolism of the river as Christ, the River of Life. I don't expect you'll be in beginners very long! Excellent work.
09/23/10
This is beautiful. Congrats on your 1st place. See, I told you it wouldn't be long before you would move up! :o)
09/24/10
Very beautiful, you touch my heart.
10/03/10
This is so like a Psalm! I have been to that river.
I can really identify with the busy pase of your life, the overwhelming desire to fit it all in and the hunger to get close to Him.