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Wow this is a strong piece part of me wants to know so much more but another part understands it's between you and God. Plus without revealing your sin, this could be anyone's story. It helps draw the reader in.
I find this piece refreshingly realistic. It clearly shows the downward slide into sin and how easy it is to fall away from that still small voice inside. I found myself on pins and needles at the end, hoping that the MC would make the right choice.
While reading this Rom. 7:19 popped into my head, "For the good that I would I do, I do not, but the evil which I would not, that I do." Sinning is the part of the human condition that we will fight against until the day Jesus takes us home.

I enjoyed this - you wrote it very well.
Been there, done that. This is a very realistic piece.