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I could definitely relate to the MC in this piece. It almost perfectly mirrors my own life. You have a few issues with punctuation here and there, but the heart of your story really touched me. The message is the thing that matters most.
09/17/10
This is an interesting story. I can relate to the fear. It raised a question, however, as to Justin's faith and why he was reluctant to attend church with his wife, seeing how badly she needed it. On the whole, good piece. Keep writing.
09/20/10
I can understand the fears that your MC has. When life crashes in around you, its hard to leave the safety of the house. I don't understand why Justin was so willing to take her to therapy, but not to church.