The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
There are many truths in your poem. Good job and God bless you.
09/16/10
I like your poem. The rhythm is right on, and it speaks the truth about our transparency to God, which is often hidden from man. Great job!
09/16/10
Nice to see a poem of this caliber in beginners. Good job, great message!
09/17/10
I liked how you wrote about God's perspective. The seeing of the inside. It's so easy to fool others but you can't fool God.
09/17/10
Thanks for the beautiful reminder. Well done
09/20/10
Nicely done. I agree with Nicole. It's easy to fool others, but we can't fool God. You showed this very clearly.
09/23/10
Congratulations for placing 6th in your level!