The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
There are many truths in your poem. Good job and God bless you.
09/16/10
I like your poem. The rhythm is right on, and it speaks the truth about our transparency to God, which is often hidden from man. Great job!
Nice to see a poem of this caliber in beginners. Good job, great message!
09/17/10
I liked how you wrote about God's perspective. The seeing of the inside. It's so easy to fool others but you can't fool God.
Thanks for the beautiful reminder. Well done
09/20/10
Nicely done. I agree with Nicole. It's easy to fool others, but we can't fool God. You showed this very clearly.
Congratulations for placing 6th in your level!