The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
I really like the term "earth suit." The idea here is good, to show what is seen and unseen. I kind of expected there to be more humor because of the term "earth suit." If you revise, maybe you could make it more like a direct conversation with Brother Paul with other humorous statements?!
I found this to be entertainingly unique and creative. Good message also!
09/17/10
This piece has such great rythm. And I really like the symbolism you used. Great title too!
This is nicely done. I enjoyed your fresh perspective.
This is nicely done. I enjoyed your fresh perspective.
09/20/10
A great reminder of what it means to have a strong inner man.