The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/10
The brain really is amazing, isn't it?

I would have expounded on at least one of these ideas a bit more. In fact, you probably could have done a full entry on any one of the subjects you touched on.

Some great reminders here. Keep writing!
This is a good devotional. It's easy to sound preachy when writing this type of an article. You did a good job with that until the last paragraph I felt it became a little preachy. That's really easy to fix just change it to first person and tell us what you've done based on the scriptures. You have a lot of great ideas and scripture references here. Keep on writing your love and passion for the Lord is apparent.
Congratulations for placing in the top 10 of your level!