The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a good job of telling a suspenseful story. I wasn't sure at first that I saw the topic but then I realized the point you made was the MC didn't think about his good deeds he just did them Great job!
I really enjoyed this story, from beginning to end. Nicely written. Great job!
I don't think you'll be in the Beginner level for long! This was masterful - so, so well-done!
Very well done. I enjoyed the suspense of this piece. There must be more Jacques Moreau!
Congratulations on a job well done. Good luck in the next level.