The Official Writing Challenge
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Very different and nicely written. I liked it a lot.
09/10/10
Kathy, I really likde this one. Good job!!!
09/10/10
Very well written submission. I enjoyed reading it. It is a good reminder to cast our cares.
You did a great job I even was feeling sorry for the demons for a bit there as their master is one scary dude. The ending was beautiful. Well done!
09/13/10
This was very creative and well written. One note - I don't believe "threadbare" would apply to a Bible. Perhaps well-worn? Overall, very nice job. Keep writing!
09/14/10
Wow - I thought this was really good! You kept my attention and I was anxious to see how the sick lady would respond to the demons. The ending was so tender and sweet - good, good writing!
09/16/10
Awesome! I was shaking in my boots (well, my sandals) in the first paragraph. Loved the redemptive ending. Congratulations.
09/18/10
Great story, I love your bringing fear and all the others alive. Congratulations on your win! Keep Writing.