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09/11/10
The last paragraph was really powerful for me. There was a glitch in my reader so I couldn't read some parts but the ending really touched me.
09/15/10
This is a very thought provoking entry. Thankyou for sharing with us.

It's very frustrating for a writer when the code for italics/bold/etc doesn't work properly. I know it took me quite awhile to figure out how to get it right. Maybe this page will be helpful in future: http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=3697.
09/16/10
I think the heart of what you wrote came after your verse. The top part seems like it may belong in a separate entry. Thank you for the bike analogy; it is very helpful for remembering how this scripture can be lived.