The Official Writing Challenge
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This can happen in many marriages. It feels good to have someone think you're attractive. But it's important to stop and think.
Good story idea. I find it helps to leave an article sit for a day and then go over it specifically looking for punctuation and grammar errors. Keep writing. You're on the right track!
I agree, good story idea and absolutely love your phrase: She had let the sentence trail off to the possibilities. Also a great message! :) You are improving in leaps and bounds...keep at it.
This is a good story, and very creative; descriptive wording makes you think. Overall a good flow.
Grateful to hear this type of battle worked through in a story, especially with the end showing a fight to keep the marriage. Thanks for sharing.