The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/10
Sometimes we do view life as half-empty forgetting our blessings...good story! :) (I'm also a thrifter shopper!)
09/03/10
This is a great story of what life is like for many in today's financial crisis.

I was confused in the middle. I thought Kasey was the narrator, but then she was called Buffie and they were talking about Kasey going through things like she was in Macy's.

There was also a spot where you forgot the quotation mark, but once I sorted things in my mind I continued on and thoroughly enjoyed the story.

The underlying message is fantastic. Pride can really do a number on us if we let it.
09/09/10
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level.