The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a wonderful story about a very difficult choice. You took such care with the MC. Life does go on, but we don't ever forget.
08/27/10
This is a very touching story. You did a good job describing the uncertainty of the MC. Well done.
You did an excellent job in condensing such an ordeal that began in High School and ended many years later. This was heart wrenching while being comforting at the same time, when the MC saw her much loved daughter. Truly gave me goosebumps! Good story, good job!
08/29/10
I have tears in my eyes because I have walked in your shoes. Well-written story, creative ending. God bless.
08/30/10
This is well beyond level one writing. You captured the emotions of most young girls in this situation and the hollowness that haunts them always. Beautiful ending.
Congratulations for placing in the top 12 of your level.