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I really liked this story. You described the poor boy's troubles and feelings very well. Thanks.
Thank you so much for sharing this easy to read, meaningful piece. Reaffirms my belief that when we truly put ourselves in the hands of the Lord He strengthens us and takes us to places we would not be able to go on our own. Peace.
Good, good job! You had me rooting for Thomas the entire time, feeling his humiliation and ultimately his triumph. Great message too. :)
This is a wonderful story of perseverance.
Excellent writing and exceptional grammar skills for a beginner. Great job!
Wow Terri - What a gift you have. Do you come up with these ideas or is this based on a true story? This is such a classic scenario and yet you did such a good job at making it fresh and making the reader want to hear the end.