The Official Writing Challenge
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Incredibly well written in my book. This whisked me into suspense from your very first sentence. The entire read was enthralling for me and sounds like a real life journey of the MC. What a reassuring message about seeing Jesus, wanting to be with Him and knowing He IS always with us. If this doesn't place...I will be dismayed. It's exciting to see so many great stories and good writing in beginners. So much to look forward too!
This is a great story and the sign of a true believer who does what Jesus asks even though every part wants to say no.
08/29/10
Excellent story-telling from beginning to end. A winner in my book. Keep writing!
Congratulations for placing in the top 12 of your level.