The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh Lord....TOO FUNNY! I believe my neighbor heard me laughing and my windows are closed!! I just love everything about this. The new sayings I learned, the humor and just the way you wrote it...you have a unique and gifted talent for writing. Can't wait to read more of your writing. This just HAS to place!! In fact...it's OKAY to send me a thank you since I already commented without knowing who you are and then I don't have to wait until Thursday..pleeeease :)
08/27/10
I agree, this should place in the top this time. Very funny piece on a serious subject. Good Luck!
This is great. I love the humor and I felt the wife's worry. I did notice in the beginning you used a singular subject-spouse, but used a plural pronoun their. It would have been fine to say his, he etc. But other than that tiny thing the story was a delight.