The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/10
I read it 20 minutes ao and its still there, good job and much deserved of a positive comment. Nice story. Thanks
Awesome job! Great dialog and story with a wonderful ending and message. Very nicely done in all respects.
08/27/10
This was so good, and yes, it will stick with me for a long time. It makes so many thoughts whirl through my head. Wonderful job of writing.
08/27/10
Wonderful story, well thought out. Loved the scripture reference cause he will command his angels to take care of you!. Keep writing.
This is a delightful read. I enjoyed every bit of it.
08/29/10
This is a winner in my book. Creative and well-written. Keep on writing! You won't be a "beginner" for long!
I SOOO enjoyed this!!!! At first I was thinking that it didn't seem on topic, but when I read the end I realized that you really did know what you were doing. Congrats on the well deserved ribbon!!! =D
Loved how you used a title that could be interpreted in two different ways! When I selected this, I thought you would be writing about an evil angle, when in fact the title was just describing his skin color. Clever! ^,^
Thanks to that detail, I’ll remember this story even longer! ;)