The Official Writing Challenge
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What heart rendering agony and suspense. You did an awesome job with your descriptions and captured my undivided attention and compassion throughout. So, so...relieved at the outcome. Praise our Lord!
08/27/10
A very good job of keeping this readers heart with yours. I am so thankful that God answered your prayers. There is nothing harder (that I have experienced) than to lose a child.
08/27/10
Wow, great story of a very traumatic situation. You did a fine job telling this and had me praying for you and the baby all the way through.
This is a beautiful story about the fight for life. It took me back to my days as an OB nurse when we had a little one who needed to be transferred to the city. It could be quite hectic and in making sure the baby was set to go, often the parents felt neglected. I always said a prayer, even if I was to busy to explain everything. Your story reminded me of a great time in my life. Thank you for sharing.
You have written a winner, I think. Excellent writing that kept my attention from beginning to end.
Congratulations for placing in the top 12 of your level.