The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story was me a few years ago. Boy you sure brought back memories of where I was and then joy of where my new path is taking me. Great Story
This read likes a passionate, heart-felt prayer from a gifted, compassionate writer. And it begins where we all need to begin, on our knees. If we are humble then not only are we promised the kingdom of heaven, but maybe also, the chance to tell other about it through the gifts He has given us that He might be glorified.
This is so beautiful, but sad at the same time. So many of us have asked those question.

An editing note: use sit instead of set in the 3rd paragraph.

Your questions and fear of rejection really pulled at my heart. The ending prayer was beautiful. You do have a gift with words.
08/23/10
Wonderful! Little note, the comma after drown in beginning shouldn't be there. That is the only thing I would change. Thanks for the story.
08/27/10
An identity crisis many can understand - including me.
Great way to express the conflicts inside. God Bless and congratulations.
Wonderful article!

We all want to know that we are loved unconditionally. Praise God that He does!

You captured our desire and the peace that God can give us perfectly in your words.