The Official Writing Challenge
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A very touching article. I am so glad that chains can be broken by God. Great story, that brings one right into the situation. Keep writing!
You write and tell a story very, very well. The dialogue, the setting the vernacular all there. Very engrossing. The only comment I'd make is to watch your spacing between paragraph as not doing so makes it difficult to read. You had to put a lot in just 750 words causing the final outcome to be a bit too convenient. But your ability to write and tell a story goes without question.
You did a fantastic job with this story. I was hooked from the first word right until the end. You made the characters come alive.
Great story. You did a great job with the setting and characters and it kept my attention all the way through. I think you needed a bit more story at the ending, but I could see this as a novel. I cared about the MC and wondered what happened to him. Keep writing!
Congratulations in placing in the top 8 of your level.
Fantastic! You are a writer. I am very impressed. I haven't added very many writers to my favs, but I'm adding you. Anointed and talented. God bless.