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08/19/10
This was a clear example of listening to the Spirit. Thank you for showing your readers how God works in our ordinary days and circumstances.
08/20/10
Very well done. Maybe I will learn not to condemn myself for some of the choices that I seem to make, that keep me from getting caught up with all that I take on to do. Discernment is certainly a virtue. Great job.
08/20/10
Very good use of dialogue and creating the hectic atmosphere - so many things going on - yet you handled it all beautifully. Great message, well delivered.
08/20/10
This is a great story. Your characters were so real. An eerily similar thing happened to me, so I have no doubt that God works in wonderful ways.
08/22/10
What a beautiful reminder to listen to the Spirit's voice! Nicely done!