The Official Writing Challenge
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This sounds like an interesting topic for a Christian radio show. I was eager to learn more about the two theories, but you did a good job. There's a missing quote or word here and there, but they aren't that big of a deal. The important thing is to get readers thinking, studying the Bible and learning the truth for themselves.
Very creative take on the subject. This is totally personal on my part, but I would have liked to have seen a brief introduction that we were about to listen to a radio presentation, rather than starting with the dialogue. Also this line: "Al, afraid of the controversial nervously said,..." This was a telling rather than a showing of Al's fear and seemed to disrupt the flow of the story/dialogue. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this and the controversy continues : )