The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/10
This sounds like an interesting topic for a Christian radio show. I was eager to learn more about the two theories, but you did a good job. There's a missing quote or word here and there, but they aren't that big of a deal. The important thing is to get readers thinking, studying the Bible and learning the truth for themselves.
08/20/10
Very creative take on the subject. This is totally personal on my part, but I would have liked to have seen a brief introduction that we were about to listen to a radio presentation, rather than starting with the dialogue. Also this line: "Al, afraid of the controversial nervously said,..." This was a telling rather than a showing of Al's fear and seemed to disrupt the flow of the story/dialogue. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this and the controversy continues : )